- Tone of voice
- Why tumblr? Why not blogger?
Action to be taken (include timescale where appropriate):
- Try looking at blogger layouts instead of tumblr. 10 mins
- Try looking at other methods of word play apart from get lost.30 mins
General feedback:
Tone of voice: " GET LOST" is a negative term and may put people off.I'm going to try and look for a softer approach
although I still believe given the context " get lost " is used correctly.The blogs a good idea as its everchanging and constantly updated.
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